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fool Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 61 |
In my tears you'll find a solid gold locket, reach out take it put in your pocket and you can keep me always. In my smile you'll find carved figurines, just take the smoothest one the one with a life of its own, place it on your mantle and I'll smile to you at night. In my hand you'll find a starlings feather, its soft against your cheek put it in your hair and I will touch you always. In my eyes you'll find a portal fall in fall through and you'll become a part of me and together we shall see. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I liked this very much. Lovely, well done!  What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Lucius Cade Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 235Saskatchewan |
Yes it is a very interesting poem. Loved it. Lucidity is the answer to all problems |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Excellent poem....you are no fool when it comes to poetry!  |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
I'm impressed, you are obviously no FOOL. Great poem, well done Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Fool~ I'm convinced that only a 'fool' could write thoughts as lovely as this. 'In my hand you'll find a starlings feather, its soft against your cheek put it in your hair and I will touch you always.' Greatly enjoyed. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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