navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #7 » Sleepy Eyed Daze --Earth Challenge #3
Open Poetry #7
Post A Reply Post New Topic Sleepy Eyed Daze --Earth Challenge #3 Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
netswan
Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369
Washington

0 posted 2000-04-18 08:53 PM


Sleepy Eyed Daze

Last night, I fell asleep to the chorus
of the frogs, this morning, I woke up
to the chirping of busy cheerful birds

I lay, my head cuddled into my pillow as the
sun poured through my window blinds and
my mind,in its sleepy eyed daze, wandered
to another place and time.

A daydreamin' sort of place -- A place
that can be again if mankind would all
pitch in.

In a hazy cloud of a dreamlike state -
I roved the valleys and climbed large
trees who waved gaily their branches at me

Children laughed in the fields while
animals passed without any fear - the sun
shone a beacon in the sky, not too hot,
not too dry -- as the wind gently blew a
white cloud by

This was a strange land, this mother
earth - not a plane in the sky - or a
telephone line - or a car or a factory
puffing out billowing black smoke into
the innoncent sky

Horses galloped majestically  -- while
the river - fresh and clean sported shiny
fish who dove through the air,
to dive back to peacefully swim again

The food chain did not seem to exist
- and I wandered through the land,
pondering on this.

Mother Earth was meant to have a way
to  eat -- some eat grass some eat wheat,
while others eat meat.  Without this
chain, the earth would be mighty full,
and this would never do, although it
does seem rather cruel.

I stretched, and yawned out of my dream
and realized that mankind does not
belong - and that was obviously
what was wrong.

A square squishing itself into a round
peg went buzzing through my head.
Now, eyes opened wide - I knew it was
time to do or die!

Each life form was meant to live and
then pass on-- in a land that plush
with grass and trees and then mankind
started taking over pompously.

We have pillaged too much from this
dying land, and it is time for each of
us to atone for our mistakes - taking
each precious day - and making a goal to
stop human waste.

I will do something each day, will you?

"To mother earth may we start to heal your pain!"

April 18, 2000




 Teresa King
www.tipsfortop.com

© Copyright 2000 Teresa King - All Rights Reserved
Parker
Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129
ON
1 posted 2000-04-18 09:14 PM


Teresa, this just flows so well. I loved all the imagery, it wasn't a dream. Thank you again challenge well met.

Parker

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #7 » Sleepy Eyed Daze --Earth Challenge #3

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary