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love lost |
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Slashed soul Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 86England |
Woman, don't you see, the pins you stick in me, Walls go up, knock me down to the floor I'm the stranger you want no more. Lend an ear, lend a buck, Am I the one who's outa luck, fall in love, fall apart, smash my tinsel heart, looks that kill, touch that maimes, hair that moves like flames. I dont want much, but have all to give, Someone to love, somewhere to live, Woman! you smashed my heart, damage done- time for us to part, thoughts of the night before watched you walk through that door, to another man, another time, no longer loved, never mine.... Treated you bad, you bruised my face, lost my love, feel a disgrace, Silence falls on the phone, god! I feel so alone. -Rich- |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
A lot of feeling in this...by the way, since we frown on double posting, I deleted this poem from the Feelings Discussion forum..thought it would get more replies here..  |
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MerritW Junior Member
since 2000-04-18
Posts 33Texas |
That's really good. I enjoyed it very very much. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Without words for reply, would you accept this simple sigh? A soul so torn for all to see... (so much like my own, y'see...) one soul rent-- as one soul breathes--- tho painful, 'tis pure poetry... (don't forget to breathe...) Love to you, m'friend...Prayers that all is well for you! |
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