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SilverTongue
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since 2000-04-18
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0 posted 2000-04-18 06:53 PM


I made this up during Spanish class, I still haven't gotten over losing my boyfriend on out anniversary, but eventually, with enough poems, he will be written out of my memory*hopefully*

Miserably I sit and watch
The weather which turns grey.
It started out so wonderful,
It WAS such a gorgeous day.

But then you opened up your mouth
And the words stung me like hail.
"It won't work" you said,
Oh why did I ever trust a male?

I covered up the rainstorm
Flowing from my eyes.
I looked up pitiously
And muttered my good-bye's.

You called after me
As I turned and walked away
"im sorry, but you'll be fine"you said.
Sarcastically I though "yeah, sure, I'll be ok"


*since I dont have time to email people, this is a little thank-you note to all those who hae put such sweet and friendly replys on my poems, thank you so much, with your friendship stitches, my broken heart is mending faster*

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Denise
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1 posted 2000-04-18 11:05 PM


Ah, this is so sad.   Speaking from experience, you will heal, it just takes some time.

Denise

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