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FairyEyes New Member
since 2000-04-17
Posts 7Louisiana |
Like birds we dance and sing our songs of praise unto the sky we call our blessings faithfully (we never can ask why) We pray for love unfaltering and shy away from pain we test emotions recklessly and feel til our hearts strain we try to live each given day as if it were our last we yearn towards newness gracefully but dwell upon dark pasts we crash and bleed we tear and scream we run until we fall We hope with our last ragged breath that we have conquered all. ~If eyes were made for seeing, then Beauty is its own excuse for Being~ RW Emerson " I'll paint you mornings of gold, Ill spin you valentine evenings..." *JARETH* |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Welcome to passions! This is a beatifully written piece. Hope to see more of your work. Jeffrey |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Enjoyed. Flowed very smoothly. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
We give/ask quite a lot in prayer, don't we? Excellent poem and welcome to Passion's. Michael |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Welcome to Passions! Lovely poem! Corinne |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi FairyEyes, Wonderful poem Welcome to passions Cerenity |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Well done poem, welcome to Passions. |
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