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FairyEyes
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since 2000-04-17
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0 posted 2000-04-18 05:26 PM



The softest voice I ever heard
was my own, telling myself
I was okay.
Without leaning closer to hear
every word was like the air
I closed my eyes and prayed
that this was just another phase.


 ~If eyes were made for seeing, then Beauty is its own excuse for Being~
RW Emerson
" I'll paint you mornings of gold, Ill spin you valentine evenings..." *JARETH*


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Mike
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1 posted 2000-04-18 06:31 PM


Nicely written.  
Cerenity
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2 posted 2000-04-18 08:15 PM


Hi FairyEyes,

I really like this one and in fact i'm enjoying all of your work, keep them comimg.

Cerenity

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3 posted 2000-04-19 08:15 PM


FairyEyes~
This is very sweetly done.
I like it.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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