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Sunshine
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0 posted 2000-05-08 09:46 PM


The Pantomime

Come flow with me, come be my love true
come glow with me, we'll start anew.
Slowly move your fingers along toward mine
and play with me this pantomime.

Use your eyes to caress my naked soul
and linger on in my artless heart
for I know it to be my virtuous goal
that never shall we part.

Use that prose that only you speak
and lift me high until I peak
and nay do not cast me downward sire,
but slowly drown in my desire.

With fingertips warm do softly play
and, listen wistful to what I say:
when your hands reach beyond my touch:
know that I love you, oh, so much.

Embrace me whole, enfold my all,
till love's rapture doth me call
and I fall within your passion so deep:
as you sow, so shall you reap.

20 July 1999
©KRJ



 Sunshine
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow


© Copyright 2000 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Kit McCallum
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1 posted 2000-05-08 09:51 PM


Oh Sunshine, this is so beautiful and flowing. Your words are mezmorizing here. Wonderful and hypnotic!

Best wishes,
/Kit

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2 posted 2000-05-09 09:11 AM


Kit, I like that you've been hypnotized... thank you!
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3 posted 2000-05-09 09:20 AM


hmmmmm, seems Im not the only one who enjoys kissing *smile*
this is exquisite Sun.
love the sweet spice and passion.
very well written...
captivating.
take care, jm

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4 posted 2000-05-09 09:35 AM


Hummm, hypnotizing, now captivating... perhaps this piece is OK after all...thanks, JM!
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