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Offshore Introspection |
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Jester59701 Member
since 2000-02-29
Posts 154 |
Seems that I'm living in my heart these days, feels like a gusher that's about to burst. Might be too late to stop exploration, wish I could though, at times I fear the worst Since I began drilling through the surface, I can't suppress the things I'm finding there Like an overpowering urgency, and a once dormant feeling of despair I won't be digging too much deeper though, just about done exploring at this site I'm seeing residual evidence of the treasure, surfacing when I write It's a supernatural resource that I'm looking for, hidden deep in the heart Purified crude that's called wisdom I seek, perhaps fear of God is the place to start [This message has been edited by Jester59701 (edited 05-10-2000).] |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Keep up the good work, sir..I see improvement with every poem. I think you'll find the comments you get here in Open will be helpful!!!  |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Jesse when ya start drilling through the surface it can get complicated. But once it's been broke a lot of wonderful things can come out  Youv'e certainly gone to the right place to start! If ya need help let me know, you know my email or icq. |
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