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CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043


0 posted 2000-05-08 05:09 PM


I lay awake
Once again last night
Yearning for your presence by my side
To feel your warmth atop me
Sharing desires that I have for thee
Don't know if I'll give into this
My heart aches for what only you can give
I wonder if I'll love another
The way I loved you
Once again last night.
CocoBaci


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lorilockheart
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 206
Alabama
1 posted 2000-05-08 06:26 PM


Must be something else!  This is really intense and passionate.  I can see how deep this runs.  
Wonderful job!
Lori

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I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance.
song by LeeAnn Womack
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
2 posted 2000-05-08 06:36 PM


If she knows your passion Cocobaci, she is lying awake daydreaming of you also ... beautiful verse ...

/Kit

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