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miriam
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 323
glendale,ca.

0 posted 2000-05-08 04:59 PM


The comfort of your arms,
Make it all worthwhile.
I see you looking straight at me,
I can't help but smile.  

I know though times will come,
But it will only make us stronger.
Our love is based,
On a love that we both hunger.

I hear your name in the wind,
I hear your laughter in the rain.
No one understands,
Strength and comfort in you I've gained.

Hold you in my arms is all I want,
See your deep dark eyes is all I need.
I don't want you to let go,
Holding you in my arms I'll fall asleep.

You are my friend,
You are my lover.
I can't pretend...
There is no other.



  miriam coronado



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lorilockheart
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 206
Alabama
1 posted 2000-05-08 06:28 PM


How eloquently you've expressed this deep, true love.  Good job.
Lori

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I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean. Whenever one door closes I hope one more opens. Promise me you'll give faith a fighting chance. And when you get the choice to sit it out or dance - I hope you dance.
song by LeeAnn Womack
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
2 posted 2000-05-08 06:32 PM


"The comfort of your arms,
Make it all worthwhile."

This is so true Miriam ... lovely sentiments ... I can feel the warmth.

/Kit

[This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 05-08-2000).]

miriam
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 323
glendale,ca.
3 posted 2000-05-10 11:44 AM


thanks Lori and Kit...i just got a new love in my life...we're at the stage where every single second we want to spend it together... i just hope it stays this way.

  miriam coronado



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