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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Nothing stops Although my substance Ripe in time Voids in rest Unexpressed. You might not think I battle yet Childhood thoughts Impressed. Although my substance Ripe in time Voids its coup It dances yet A youthful tune In dream By phantoms All new. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Wow, Sy. This is chilling. love the ending - I too seem to be facing new phantoms... as if the old ones weren't enough to deal with...LOL Great poem, love the change up on form. Michael |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this is a very different kind of poem for you I like ...MUCH!! and relate well... those ghosts from the past seem to always drop in at dinnner time *S* great work Sy... take care, jm |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Voids in rest Unexpressed. ... Childhood thoughts Impressed. I am too! A change in flow from you. Different but great as usual Seymour. Regards, sudhir |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
Wonderful!  " It dances yet A youthful tune In dream By phantoms All new." Loved it! "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying." Harry Anderson, "Night Court" *Cassandra Roseen* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Michael, Age doesn't change much except your looks in the mirror. Nice comment thank you. Janet, Thank you so much for the read and beautiful comment. *L* Sudhir, Thank you for the great. Dawn, Thank you for the wnoderful. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I enjoyed your new format Sy...and the poem! |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Seymour, I cannot read one of your poems without enjoying your perspective. Well writ, as always... ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ 'It dances yet A youthful tune' Aye ! That it does my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, Thank you so much. *L* Meadow, Wonderful comment. *L* Marge, You are a love. *L* |
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