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~Of Sister's Love~
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~Of Sister's Love~ |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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Beautiful brown hair, chocolate eyes- She’s a sight, this sister of mine, A soul as pure, as loves own truth- She’s been an angel beyond youth. All grown up, she’s a woman now- Drowning in her happiness found, Her mirror reflection, that he is- Melting within a touch, a kiss. Future plans erupt in minds- As his ring has marked the sign, I see her face, forever aglow- No need to ask, I just know. So I cry my happy tears today- My baby sis, a wife one soon day, She’ll change her name for him- More complete than she’s ever been. As the wedding bells are sure to chime- You’ll find me ever by your side, Giving you that age-old, knowing smile- ~Of Sisters Love~... in unending style. *I’m so glad to see you happy baby girl…* I love you Amber… Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...yes I know that feeling when you see someone you love and care for find happiness. James |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Perfect devina! Sister are wonderful people. Marina |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
Yes...sisters are special...and Gen has shown me that. I know what it's like to see them happy too, and a blessing indeed. Thanks for the smile. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
devina...girl this is SO perfect and touching. my sis is my best friend too... (shes the blonde, I'm the brunette) LOL how sweet and loving this poem is... very cool D, take care, jm Well the sun sets gently on your shoulders And it makes me want to touch you there. And the light in your eyes makes me feel Like there's something much better out there Something kind... And I know someday I might be looking around Trying to find some purpose Well purpose it can't be that hard to find As long as I've got the wind... The wind and your love to carry me. vertical horizon |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
James- yep, it's a wonderful feeling indeed!! Marina- I think I've got one of the best!! thank you...  Rob- So you know first hand, how her smile makes all worthwhile? I know you do!!  Janet- So we're just the opposite, me and you? I'd give anything for that deep chocolate color!! *sigh* But a blonde I'll be I suppose...*L* Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
sisters share the passion deep a mystic meet of mind-so sweet.... lovely love heart-beat-to-beat a friend, soul's end... a hug complete.... Love to you, and Sister's sis too! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Devina~ Just devine. I know you two are close and that is a wonderful thing. I lost a sister in October of last year ... so I know a loss of one who loved her dearly. Take care of that little sis as you've obviously always done. What a wonderful thing ... a sister. Love to you both. ~*Marge~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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amber Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 240los banos, ca, |
tanya- you know that I love you and our relationship hasnt been the greatest lately but I dont ever forget that you love me. My life is changing so much know i just want someone to be as happy for me as i finally am. I remember being a little girl and telling myself that nothing like this would ever happen to me becuase i never realized what it ment to have a deep security. and now that i have that i am more happy than i could ever be in my entire life. I never thought I would ever find someone that i was so in love with. and just becuase his ring marks my hand, doesnt mean that our memories dont still, and will forever mark my heart. i love you! |
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amber Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 240los banos, ca, |
Only after trying so hard to let go, did i realize how much i wanted to hold you forever> Amber and Ellis forever and always [This message has been edited by amber (edited 04-20-2000).] |
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PeterPeter Junior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 30British, London |
Hi Devina, I have read this poem a few times, also the comments given by our friends at Passions. I think the essence of this poem is reflected in these lines, only: Future plans erupt in minds- As his ring has marked the sign, I see her face, forever aglow- No need to ask, I just know. I think the point is being missed. As Amber will be by her sister. PeterPeter |
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PeterPeter Junior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 30British, London |
Hi Devina, I have read this poem a few times, also the comments given by our friends at Passions. I think the essence of this poem is reflected in these lines, only: Future plans erupt in minds- As his ring has marked the sign, I see her face, forever aglow- No need to ask, I just know. I think the point is being missed. As Amber will be by her sister. PeterPeter |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Hmmm...I'm like really confused... Devina wrote the poem for Amber, but the responses below baffle me--the one form Amber and Amber again-- Anyway, I liked the poem~ Marie~ |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Hmmm...I'm like really confused... Devina wrote the poem for Amber, but the responses below baffle me--the one from Amber and Amber again-- Anyway, I liked the poem~ Marie~ |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
serenity- I thank you for the both of us dear...and just because there's no blood between us, still NO love is lost on you, my dear sis of the heart!!! Marge- I'm sorry to hear about your sister hun, a soul as beautiful as yours doesn't deserve pain EVER...HUGS sweetie... Amber- Hey...is it really you? Gracing this sister's presence? hehe I'm glad you got a chance to stop in and see this one. Know that I'm so happy for you lil sis...you deserve nothing but the best, and I know he'll give it to you. I love you!!! Peter- thanks for reading!! She's knows how happy I am for her, but I will miss my lil sis all the same!!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Marie- Yep, amber didn't log off...G* I fixed it so you won't be confused! Thanks for the read!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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mariee66 Senior Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 596Recess, OfYourMind |
Hmmm...I'm like really confused... Devina wrote the poem for Amber, but the responses below baffle me--the one from Amber and Amber again-- Anyway, I liked the poem~ Marie~ |
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