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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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If I were a star, Wouldn't I be shining for you? If I were a clock, Wouldn't I be ticking for you? If I were a cloud, Wouldn't I be floating for you? If I were the moon, Wouldn't I be waiting for you? O my sky, my beautiful deep blue sky, As the sun shines into you, Bringing shades of crimson, red and yellow, so bright, Waiting for the night to say hello, Brushing aside the light, Paving way for the dark, My dear night sky... In any moment of decision, The best thing you can do is the right thing, The next-best thing is the wrong thing, And the worst thing you can do is nothing. - Theodore Roosevelt |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
How delicate and loving, this... beautiful... ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Enchanting! |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Errr....mezmerizing I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Claire, Martie, Jeffery, You people are beautiful, enchanting and mesmerising yourself... Thanks a lot for your appreciative words... I am touched! Regards, sudhir |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"If I were the moon wouldn't I be waiting for you." This is lovely writing. James |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Very picturesque Sudhir ... this is a lovely descriptive verse! /Kit |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
James, You are ever so appreciative. Thanks. Kit, Thanks you for reading and appreciating. Sincere regards, sudhir |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
This lovely poem is a painting of such honest and pure love, it touches me very deeply. Very nicely written. I know these feelings, that you have put so well into words! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sudhir~ This is so very pretty. 'Waiting for the night to say hello' And the neat thing is ... we get to see it every evening. I love the sunset that kisses the night into being. Nice render. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
That was beautiful! Yay space!  "Even a fool knows you can't touch the stars, but it doesn't stop a wise man from trying." Harry Anderson, "Night Court" *Cassandra Roseen* |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Rosemary, Marge, Dawn, Thank you all a lot for your appreciative words. Regards and cheers, sudhir. |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
I hav'nt read you before so i just picked this one at random...and its beautiful... great work If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Avanti, Thanks a lot... I am glad that you liked what you picked...I hope you read other poems by me and enjoy them too...I will try and not disappoint... regards, Sudhir Death, be not proud, though some have called thee, Mighty and dreadful, for thou art not so; - John Donne |
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