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ice pop wisdom |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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(from the freezer, edible sweet ice imprinted with riddles. to find the answer you must swallow) in a snow bank. what's the richest kind of air? what do you call a piece of wood with nothing to do? "home on the range." sandy. cliff. he wanted to brainwash him. in a remote area. the street. in baseball parks. behind the plate. he gave him a check. what's the difference between an actor and a baker? what did the announcer name his son? (in a variety of colors, sticky wood bones, dry and light asleep in their wrappers. i learned nothing i needed to know, you know) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
very cryptic these days..but I like it that way...and it's too early to tell about useless knowledge....love to you. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
(in a variety of colors, sticky wood bones, dry and light asleep in their wrappers. i learned nothing i needed to know, you know) ------------- wisdom is right... and either way...you were inspired... so you gained something I'll take inspiration from where ever it comes. *smile* later gator jm/bs |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Hmmm..Interesting poem, but I don't know if I understood the point of it. LOL! It could just be my state of mind today.  Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau" |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
s, Believe me, riddles printed on popsicle sticks are useless knowledge. jm/bs, Glad you enjoyed. I knew I'd get around to the sequel to "juice pop wisdom" some time. And there's a pun there, by the way. "pop wisdom" -- all that bs rich psychologists tell us what's wrong with us. Anyway... t, Don't worry, it's not you. This is one of those poems I wrote just for the words, not the meaning. Mike |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
i've been doing that myself lately...writing poems for the sounds of the words and who cares if it means anything or what it means to anybody... it's a little experiment i'm doing... anyway... about your poem... i liked it and didn't know why i liked it... the poem itself is like riddle on a popsicle stick... enjoyed! |
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