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We Two |
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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
We Two When last my head upon my pillow rests Incessant longings smoulder deep inside. An ever present weight upon my chest Is evidence this love won't be denied. Then comes the midnight knock upon my door And shrouded in a veil of moonlit mist, The beauty kings abandon kingdoms for, My Sweet, whose satin cheeks have angels kissed. The furies of our pent up passions raged As tears of solemn gratitude were wept. The hungers of our love at last uncaged And promises of pure devotion kept. Exquisite moments shared in endless bliss, For hoped for love was never love like this. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
David, David, David! such exquisite writing my friend - beautifully done!  Roniece |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Lovely!! Love and hugs, Lizzie  "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
When last my head upon my pillow rests Incessant longings smoulder deep inside. An ever present weight upon my chest Is evidence this love won't be denied. ------------------- Exquisite moments shared in endless bliss, For hoped for love was never love like this. ----------------- *SIGHS* *smile* this one is so great...love the imagery and the use of gothic images and the uncaged hunger and lust mixed with bliss and devotion aint half bad either  very nice D2...VERY jm |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Oh my! Absolutely beautiful, David! 'As tears of solemn gratitude were wept' Love doesn't get any better than that! Denise |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Well....geesh, what to say to something so short yet sooo sweet! First of all, I love this style. It's easy to read, and each line packs it's own punch so to speak. There's no way I could pick one line to be my fav, but if I had to, it would be, "My sweet, whose satin cheeks have angels kissed..." Where did you get this? If these are the thoughts that run through your head....well....I like your head! Superb and exquisite all wrapped up in one! Er....two! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Are you sure your name isn't William? Lovely sonnet sir!!  |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Sensual and bursting with passion. Yeah. Corinne |
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