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Brandyn Sand Member
since 2000-04-21
Posts 82Columbia, SC 
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Haunted I will steal your hopes. I will cloud your dreams. I’ll be there to darken your thoughts. I will make your heart heavy, Though you fight to ignore me Your efforts will all be for naught. I will crush your spirit, And prey on your mind. There is no escaping my woe. You won’t ever see me, And cannot defeat me; I will frustrate all that you know. I will punish you daily With guilt and self-doubt; You will question all that is true. Your decisions have given Me reason for living; I will never stop haunting you. I am... REGRET © Brandyn Sand |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Brandyn* You have said this so well, regret clouds everything that comes into our lives...and more times then not lets us miss out on what we so desprately want. Very well put together in thought and in feeling. Thank you for sharing this. Hold me for yesterday Kiss me for tomorrow But love me for today. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wow! Great message and a great poem! Well done, Brandyn! Denise |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
(sighs) Have known this feeling. So true are your words and everyonce and a while the "haunting" returns. |
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daft Junior Member
since 2000-05-02
Posts 16 |
SO sad at times, however true. I like the way that you use your words. It's as if they just flow & neverend! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well done! A belated Welcome to Passions... |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Well said and a great message here. Corinne |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
How true! How we are so much ever so haunted by regret of our wrongdoings and 'left to be done' deeds. Nice work, I liked the piece. Regards, Sudhir. Take each day as it comes, Consider each day as a flight, Try hard to succeed and fly, Surely then you will reach some height. But if by some chance you don’t, Remember that tomorrow will always come. Learn this well and learn this hard That today’s efforts will pay for tomorrow’s fun. A Crazy Monster, a.k.a Ski |
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