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Open Poetry #7

Far and Near

eyesplus2
Member

since 2000-03-02

Posts 163
australia

0 posted 2000-05-03 04:19 AM

                  Far apart
       Yet
Always near
       In
My Heart
     In
My soul
   Our
Love is
Strong
   Yet
               We are weak
     For
We yearn
    For
Each other
      To
    Touch
      To
Be forever

[This message has been edited by eyesplus2 (edited 05-03-2000).]

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2000-05-03 04:23 AM

Not Weak---

HUMAN...

lovely and thought-provoking...I thank you.

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

2 posted 2000-05-03 05:50 AM

I agree with serenity there, we are human and humanly feelings nurture us through life...

BTW, interesting read!

Regards.

Take each day as it comes,
Consider each day as a flight,
Try hard to succeed and fly,
Surely then you will reach some height.

But if by some chance you don’t,
Remember that tomorrow will always come.
Learn this well and learn this hard
That today’s efforts will pay for tomorrow’s fun.

A Crazy Monster, a.k.a Ski

ESP
Member Elite

since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

3 posted 2000-05-03 06:03 AM

This is lovely....I agree with Serenity, not weak...human.

Love and hugs,
Lizzie

"Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."

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