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What difference will it make?
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What difference will it make? |
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Lucius Cade Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 235Saskatchewan |
this world is no place for me what difference does it make if i go to school tommorow if i get good sleep tonight will it effect my future what does it hold for me some job, proffession, retirement death could be seconds away what difference does it make if I am a lawyer, or a teacher a police man, or a killer maybe i dont care what happens so why try in life, why live for death i am being shaped by the world around me why sleep tonight...... why wake tommorow....... what difference will it make this is what has become of me Lucidity is the answer to all problems |
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mete out Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 270england |
***lucious cade, this poem is full of insight and with a painful need for answers. i dont have them, if i did i'd gladly share, mind you if i had them i wouldn't be here...i'd be a normal 9-5er... keep your head above water my dear, no matter how much you want to sink at times... love lou xxx I am not a preacher, I just speak the world as I see it. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
I guess the point might be because we have to live each moment...the moments can't escape us till they end - so why not LIVE them? Good poem.  |
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Lucius Cade Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 235Saskatchewan |
Thanks mete for understanding Severn thanks for the read, Lucidity is the answer to all problems |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Lucuis Cade, Im not claiming to know the answers to your questions Lucious, but one thing I have found out for the question that are in my life is that the answers come when were ready for them and not until then, I have and am in this same spot asking questions of why and I could give my self all kinds of reasons but they will not satisfy me until I am ready to deal with the answers whole heartedly. I have found there to be no set direction to life and no one but us can fill in the blanks. I wish you the very best in your seach and welcome to passions. Cerenity |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Well said cerenity-1 I lie awake in a world filled with dreams, but dreams can be so real when you don't know you're asleep |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lucius~ Don't let the differences make you - YOU make the difference ! My friend, each of us makes a difference in someone's life. Find something of yourself to share with another in need ... and you WILL see what a difference it makes. Hon, this is well-written ... someone with this much insight is capable of making a difference. So breathe the air of renewal and reach a goal today. YOU ARE SOMEBODY ... ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Well written Lucius and I suppose you won't be happy until you find out that difference...reminds me of a song which was about someone that found happiness...it went like this...what a difference a day makes...24 little hours...what a difference a day makes...and the difference is you. James |
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