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Old Soul I Await Your Answer
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Old Soul I Await Your Answer |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California 
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Old Soul I Await Your Answer I beseech you old soul tell me in which way to walk for I have lost my bearing’s and fortitude. I possessed strength upon will during my youth, and maintained precious ground through adult challenge. But even though I have grown in wisdom I have lost strength in heart to survive this days trials and strife. Please old soul give of your wisdom, teach this forsaken flesh the way through its trials and errors. My heart has taken possession of me, and will not loosen its grip. To over ride its power is to no avail. To bring these pangs of distress to there end I must find the answers. To save myself, but destroy others in the process this is my dilemma. Please old soul hear my begging look my direction and give that in which you are known, the knowledge to conquer the hearts pull, please show me your wisdom I await your spoken word. By, Cerenity |
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netswan Senior Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 1369Washington |
Powerful Piece here Cerenity -- Thanks for sharing --- netswan |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Very good....sometimes even the youngest among us have old souls...I hope you get the answers you seek. |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
I saw an sign the other day that reminds me of the the one who I call "Old Soul" I think it is the same as yours......the sign read " IF you are not as close to GOD as you were before......Guess who moved." Lovely moving peice.....thanks for sharing A man does not love a woman because she is beautiful...But she is beautiful because he loves her. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
HI EVERYONE, Thank you for your kinds replys. If a mountain of you know what (----) could fall on you, you would get out of its way, except when the mountain is so BIG,GIANT,MOSTEROUS you get the picture, well I ran but not fast enough and so my day is full (----) of you know what!!!! Hence poor pitiful me poem, But tomorrow is another day right, Cerenity |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
.gif) This is very well written but beyond that it echos my thoughts very often...a romantic often forgets until you're holding broken heart in hand that it's often better to lead with your soul and mind rather than your heart. Awesome job and thank you so much for sharing this. Hold me for yesterday Kiss me for tomorrow But love me for today. |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Cerenity, Dear, You have touched me yet again! I often have to ask for guidance from the "old soul" as well. But worry not. Just when things get their worst, then there is no where to go but up! Love Ya! Terry< !signature--> ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. [This message has been edited by TerryW (edited 05-02-2000).] |
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TearsFromHeaven Junior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 19Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Cerenity, What a lovely poem! I too know how it feels to be crushed under that mountain (--). But luckily, when you have friends like the ones I have found here, you can always dig your way out quickly and carry on.  Trust Instinct. Instinct will keep an animal alive, but Logic can kill a man. Richard "Rickey" N. Boydstun, Jr. |
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warmhrt Senior Member
since 1999-12-18
Posts 1563 |
Cerenity, I feel your words within my soul, and wish the same wishes. Oh, that we could have power over the "heart's pull"(excellent words). There would be a lot less broken hearts in the world. Great poem. Warmhrt the poet's pen...gives to airy nothing A local habitation and a name ~ Shakespeare |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Yep, tomorrow is another day! And if nothing else, perhaps we learn to run a little faster...hehehe!! Great poem, Cenenity! Denise |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Miss.Butterfly You are right im just really tierd and want it to all end or get better, thank you for your reply. Hi Terry, Yes I know this but how long should I be a bottom dweller? Thank you for your kind words. Hi Tears from Heaven, You are so right because if it were'nt for this place I would of --- well I would of!!!! thank you for your reply Hi warmhrt, Yes the sun would shine and the birds would sing every day ha. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Hi Denise, Well you have made me laugh, thank you so much, it was getting pritty stinky in here, so next time I will take your advice i'll practice he he. Love all of ya, Cerenity |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Definitely a powerful piece. I have often been called an old soul myself..and I believe I am. Exellent work, Cerenity, I enjoyed this a lot. *Krista Knutson* "Lonliness is the human condition." *Mark Twain, in the book "The Adventures of Huckleberry Finn"* |
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