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Tint of the Day's Moon

LilTai
Member

since 2002-06-08

Posts 189
United States

0 posted 2002-06-10 04:36 PM

Tint of the Day's Moon

watching you beneath the tint of the day's moon
i love you
the way your hand takes mine
and rubs away all my pain
you're so amazing
your herat warms mine
right now you look so happy
peaceful
your eyes lay shut holding dreams
i watch you and love you
i love you for caring
and i know that from now until forever
i will love you
i want to watch you in every light
and hold you in your thought
i'm only truly happy with you
i want us to be
(in) and love
forever

-Tai
(still working on a signature

..)

pegasus111
Member Elite

since 2000-07-27

Posts 2219
ocala, fl, usa

1 posted 2002-06-10 04:40 PM

nice beginning Tai..welcome to the corner.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost

LilTai
Member

since 2002-06-08

Posts 189
United States

2 posted 2002-06-10 04:50 PM

Pegasus111--thanks! Just wanted to let you know I follow all of your writing on the forums...I love the way you write, your style is great =) Thanks for replying..

-Tai

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

3 posted 2002-06-10 05:25 PM

Dear Litai, Nice love poem. Welcome. Joyce

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

4 posted 2002-06-10 11:24 PM

Liltai: Very tender and sweet.

Betty Lou Hebert

Anonymity
Junior Member

since 2002-06-11

Posts 45

5 posted 2002-06-11 04:01 PM

This is a sweet poem I enjoyed the emotions very much.

LilTai
Member

since 2002-06-08

Posts 189
United States

6 posted 2002-06-11 09:40 PM

Thank you all, you're all too kind to me =)
I appreciate all you've said. Thanks *hugs to all*

Tai

I'm an idealist..I don't know where I'm going, but I'm on my way =)

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