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Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores

0 posted 2002-05-29 09:33 PM



In Melodious Tone
~*Marge Tindal*~

Silently lays the morn-in-making
long before the woods awaken
Then with flurried burst of sun
critters with song have begun
Singing the day in melodious tone
Oh, the sounds that greet my dawn~





© Copyright 2002 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-05-29 10:19 PM


What a wonderful way to be greeted.
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2 posted 2002-05-29 11:06 PM


Marge:  Dawns are awesome right now.  The birds are just singing their hearts out and the sky is so pretty.  Sort of pearlescent.
Your poem describes it perfectly.

Betty Lou Hebert

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3 posted 2002-05-29 11:35 PM


sounds like you are describing a Florida morning Marge. Lovely piece.

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



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4 posted 2002-05-30 11:42 AM


mmmm. mornings are great...I just wish that I was awake enough to appreciate them more. simple details written in flow, I must say I enjoyed!
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5 posted 2002-05-30 04:51 PM


This is lovely, Marge. *S* Just last week, I got to see a moonset and a sunrise... this reminds me of that special moment. *S*
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6 posted 2002-05-30 05:57 PM


This is beautiful and so are God's mornings. Joyce
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7 posted 2002-05-30 06:07 PM


Marge,

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8 posted 2002-05-30 06:12 PM


This is a blessing and a delight, Marge...
how perfectly adorned is your morn-in-the-making!
A treasure!
Lary

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9 posted 2002-06-03 02:23 PM


Loved it!!
Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
10 posted 2002-06-03 07:54 PM


Friends~
Thank you all so very much ...
It's song-on-wing when the morning awakens~
I LOVE FLORIDA mornings~

You each make it a beautiful day to be a poet~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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11 posted 2002-06-04 12:36 PM


I do love your work

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
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InterLoper~
God does all the work~
All I need do is pen it~
Thank you~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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