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Xeonox
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0 posted 2001-05-26 01:54 AM


leaves bellow their songs,
with the tree-
as the composer,

wind whistles,
silently-
within limits,

the ground made-

the senses notice-
but overlook-
to recognize,

for the beauty in you-
remains-
above all.

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

© Copyright 2001 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-05-26 08:02 AM


Excellent imagery.
Melton

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2 posted 2001-05-26 08:47 AM


Very nice! Beautiful!
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3 posted 2001-05-26 10:33 AM


Well done and to the point.  Joyce
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4 posted 2001-05-26 04:10 PM


I've covered what I had wish to cover.

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

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