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ellie LeJeune
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0 posted 2002-03-24 06:51 AM



Mejestic is the hope of one small seed,
as it wends it's way through fertile soil.

Glorious this Spring!

The Eternal promise after dark cold dawns.
Long forgotten now, as the remembrance
becomes a sunrise of Springs reality.

Birth of all things new.

Life giving, as this restless wanderer,
finds roots and depth of long lost dreams,
in this fertile dawn of Springs horizon.

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

© Copyright 2002 ellie LeJeune - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2002-03-24 10:20 AM


These are lovely verses in praise of spring.

Joyce

pegasus111
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2 posted 2002-03-24 10:34 AM


you continue to amaze me with your range and manipulation of words. nicely done Fairy Queen...

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



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3 posted 2002-03-24 06:26 PM


ellie:  the very spirit of spring is held captive in your poem.

Betty Lou Hebert

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4 posted 2002-03-25 10:34 AM


Finely detailed in a few words, the hope of spring...a pleasent read for a gloomy CT day.  Thanks!


Denise
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5 posted 2002-03-25 09:04 PM


Very beautifully done, Ellie! We're sure getting that Springtime rain, aren't we? Oh, yeah, Springtime rain isn't really snow mixed with hale, is it?!
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6 posted 2002-03-26 08:22 PM


Ellie~
I hope my Spring dances upon your poetic lawn~
This is just lovely~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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