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Tramp Poet
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Could Be Anywhere...

0 posted 2002-03-03 03:16 PM


Infinity and Beyond

Words come so easy
when “written, not spoke.”
I pray for the ways to say,
describe, how I love you...

You; my dear, are the gentle touch
of comfort to a dying man.
A sacrifice of compassion
just holding his failing hand.

You are the beauty of first kiss
a weary mother after birth.
Sweet exhaustion, exhilaration,
giver of most precious gift.

You; my love, are breaking dawn
through dazzling sunrise.
Brilliant fall colors that wane
into spring, fresh innocence.

You are the laughter, dear
the shines into another.
The breath fiery, intoxicating
kisses of true lover.

You; my love, are all these
more than one may imagine.
You are my life and love
beyond inadequate expression.

You exist as my vibrant love
in midst of tribulation.
The presense of goodness
promise of expectation.

Like that most famous of poem,
“Let me count the ways...”
Yet; the job is never quite done
‘cause my mind can not hold infinity.

    

    ...was once upon, bleeding
        and Tramp Poet for awhile.
         Now; I'm just little ole me
          wearing nothin but a smile

© Copyright 2002 Daniel James Burt - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2002-03-03 04:02 PM


A precious love story.  joyce
nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2002-03-04 09:31 AM


You truly know the meaning of loving....

beautiful

*S
M

Tramp Poet
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Could Be Anywhere...
3 posted 2002-03-06 01:05 PM


thanks (blushing...)
familiar theme, eh?
lol trying to get signature right...
seems just can't get it perfect...
hard on a meticulous person like meself...
Daniel

    

    ... was once upon, bleeding
         and Tramp Poet for a time.
          Now; I'm just little ole me
           "Say friend; spare a r

Denise
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4 posted 2002-03-08 10:01 PM


*sigh* This has got to be one of the most beautiful poems that I have ever read. *sigh*
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