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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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Beyond Simple Expression In the window, sun is spilling warmth upon me. Can I be a silhouette within it's shadowed taste? Climbing mirrors had it's reflective destructiveness, Now I can see through creatively managed view. Words upon this page for elegance of eyeful contact, Sweating within syllables, as together poets dance. I'm winging here some flight beyond simple expression, Reading unto your minds a metaphoric nightmare. My rehearsal of caked on metaphoric values tumbling, Avalanche like reactions spewing forth rocks of words. Dress the houses within path in Armour suitable to carry, for to you this day, I've left a curious massaged mind. Sometimes we have to follow a stronger voice, even if it's silent. [This message has been edited by Lost Dreamer (edited 05-23-2001).] |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Words upon this page for elegance of eyeful contact, Sweating within syllables, as together poets dance. I'm winging here some flight beyond simple expression, Reading unto your minds a metaphoric nightmare. wow, you really went (dreadied word) "deep" on this one. excellent write, the second verse especially packs a punch.  "across the unfair divide where black will never meet white so read my token lips like they never exist" nicky wire [This message has been edited by brian madden (edited 05-23-2001).] |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
This carries a power I can appreciate. I love it and miss your work. |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Ria; wow, depth upon depth and meaning beyond the cosmic poets words...I love this! You are magical in your concepts! Love, Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Martinque Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 69 |
Very good. Much enjoyed! |
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RebeccaJoy Junior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 35 |
Wonderful individuality shines here. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
I thank all of you for your replies, and I appreciate each and every one. |
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