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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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Lavender fragrance Drapes the cool evening air Tired day greets night thanks to all of you who helped me learn this form and thanks to all who appreciated my attempts regards, sudhir [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (02-01-2002 07:40 AM).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful, Sudhir! |
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Trillium 
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
This is lovely! Lavender is my favorite scent and I could picture the scene your words created. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
HYou are a quick learner. This is lovely. Joyce |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
you just learned? this is great! the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Perfection! A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I absolutely love the fragrance of lavender, and I also love this senryu from you. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thank you all, so very much... Regards, sudhir |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sudhir, my friend~ My mother was lavender ... thank you for the delicate remember *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thanks a lot, Marge... My friends, this was not entirely 5-7-5 form, as a dear friend helped me figure out... so I have tried again with the same theme... Lavender fragrance Drapes the crispy evening breeze Weary day greets night Thank you, my friend, you know who you are... Regards, sudhir |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sudhir, my sweet friend Thinking now in perfect blend Even more lovely~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
A serene image m'friend Well Done  Maree |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Perfectly done Sudhir! I grow Lavender in my garden. ~Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thank you very much, my friends... regards, sudhir |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
This is soft and pretty! Well said!Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
And she will wake refreshed from her evening wear, of lavender scent. Lovely! Deb |
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