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DJLI
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since 2000-06-21
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TN, USA

0 posted 2002-01-09 01:08 PM


The light grows dim,
hiding all from sight,
covering the Earth,
in a peaceful starlit night.

With brilliant colors,
cast out upon the sky,
It seems more scenic and wonderous
than any painting you could buy.

Slowly the sun fades,
sinking into the ground,
leaving a warm darkness,
over everything to be found.

life is like a road: full of pot holes and dead ends.

© Copyright 2002 Lisa Marie - All Rights Reserved
Mother_Earth
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1 posted 2002-01-09 02:33 PM


DJLI, this is beautiful.  You have painted a lovely picture with your words,  ME
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Member Patricius
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2 posted 2002-01-09 02:45 PM


this is lovely!  I was watching a beautiful sunset last night and thinking the same thing...........no painting can ever duplicate nature!

Betty Lou Hebert

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Member Rara Avis
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3 posted 2002-01-09 04:49 PM


Sunsets are a promise of the sunrise.  This is lovely.  Joyce
Wikket
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4 posted 2002-01-09 08:06 PM


Great!  A calming of the senses as we go into the darkness yet again!   Nice Work!

~~Jamie

"...Two roads diverged in a wood, and I--took the one less traveled by, And that has made all the difference." --Robert Frost

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