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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
Dream while you can my dear for the night of life slips by and when the snows and winds do howl and you hear winter's bitter cry then you'll know what happens to a soul that loses hope of life and why the ice with cracking laugh cut a heart like jagged knife Dream, when the day is warm when the sun shines in the sky and light a fire in winter's night and may yet your dreams survive I used to dream and hope for love used to fly dreams on kite string but huddled now in winter's grasp bells of sorrow often ring Dream for me my darling some bright Blue angel I may see I would now..if I could now.. pray and help...once again ... to dream. " The question shouldn't be...'Why are we here?' but rather 'ARE we here? " |
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is great, Sol! Fantastic expression! |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Just getting back to read all of the great poems that have been posted, while I was busy with Thanksgiving. great work. Joyce |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
"blue angel" did it for me,,, what a lovely phrase.... Kathleen (Kay) |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Lovely and so sad...yet dreams have a way of sneaking back...Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
Thank you everyone for the comments...i was having the darndest time getting here with the work comp I use...by finally I made...you are all very kind in your comments...THANK YOU  Sol " The question shouldn't be...'Why are we here?' but rather 'ARE we here? " |
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Canuck Cat New Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 4Canada |
I agree with Ellie- so lovely yet sad too! I enjoyed reading it, could even place myself there, but found it a little bit bumpy on the end :O) Keep up the good work! |
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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
hey Canuck(( grr..hoped I spelled that correctly )) I agree....it is a bit bumpy at the end...a sad trend of late for me...I have been using my breaks at work to sometimes scribe new stuff...time often gets the better of me and thus the creative process suffers  Thank you though...for reading " The question shouldn't be...'Why are we here?' but rather 'ARE we here? " |
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just_another_fe Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483MICHIGAN |
This was a nice peice of work. you described it well. It hurts when we can no longer dream or no longer want. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Dear Sol, I really liked your poem. The imagery was vivid, and I love that in poetry. Nan |
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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
Fe, Pilgrimage, thank you both for givin my poem a read Glad you both enjoyed it Sol " The question shouldn't be...'Why are we here?' but rather 'ARE we here? " |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
You choose to describe well  I really like how you compare hopeless with nature.Dream once lost is lost... Isn't that is sad? But dream are like stars- Come here and go Yet watching you glow and grow all the time. Somewhere out there in universe there will be another star for you. Eliza Simmons ~Flower lasts so an hour, yet spring will brings her back to life again. |
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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
Aries....thank you for your kindest of words...truely Sol " The question shouldn't be...'Why are we here?' but rather 'ARE we here? " |
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Wikket Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 340Santa Clara, CA USA |
Great as always, Sol.  --Jamie "...This is how you remind me of what I really am, this is how you remind me..." --Nickleback |
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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
Thanks jamie ...I think I like these holiday smileys..heh heh heh Sol " The question shouldn't be...'Why are we here?' but rather 'ARE we here? " |
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