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dgvarner
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0 posted 2001-11-16 01:18 AM




your reality seems to be
finding its fading...
is it true--
this message that i'm
    receiving?
how is it that you still have
the same affect on me
with my feelings stuffed deep inside
away from view?
you still rearrange
    my breathing pattern...
you still slip into my daydreams...
and i feel you somewhere
    in my night dreams...
will my hands remember the tremble
    at the need of you--
that desperate ache
of wanting that which i cannot grasp...
do you feel what i feel?
do you dream my dreams?
do i move you
the way you move me--
    you still
         move me...

-dgvarner
11-15-01

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"am i in too deep--
have i lost my mind?
i dont care--
youre near, tonite..."
-enrique

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2001-11-16 08:59 AM


DG~
Oooooooooohhhh, I like this little morsel of thought~

'you still rearrange
my breathing pattern...'


Love it~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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Parker
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2 posted 2001-11-16 12:57 PM


This poem is reminder that the net is wonderful gift that can bring bring friends, bring love and a peek into possibilities together....  

But its a damn joker cause when I sign off,
I am still alone, and a world away from another heart.  

But, of course there's that possibilities thing.  

Parker  

Joyce Johnson
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3 posted 2001-11-16 06:56 PM


Lovely pondering.  Joyce
EagleOne
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4 posted 2001-11-17 12:59 PM


Once again your words move me, well done!

"Let me pierce the realm of glamour
So I know just what I am." ~ Van Morrison


Denise
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5 posted 2001-11-17 10:37 AM


Nicely done, DG! Very well expressed!
dgvarner
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6 posted 2001-11-17 06:18 PM


MARGIE..glad you enjoyed this morsel..  
PARKER..believe in possibilies..     but i guess we should only count on probabilities..eh?  
JOYCE..thank you  
EAGLE..glad to have touched you in some way  
DENISE..thank you for the encouragement..  

sometimes it feels necessary to stuff feelings inside..so as not to cause the heart too much damage..a way of getting on with life..but it takes time, to actually do the getting on with life in such a way that those feelings dont pop back up now and then...

thanks for reading..     hugs, g


~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"tomorrow's another day, and i'm thirsty anyway--so bring on the rain!"

[This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 11-17-2001).]

notarose
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7 posted 2001-11-20 07:32 PM


wonderful writing, shall save this for inspiration *s
dgvarner
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8 posted 2001-11-21 08:16 AM


thank you NOTAROSE..  

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"tomorrow's another day, and i'm thirsty anyway--so bring on the rain!"

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