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ellie LeJeune
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0 posted 2001-11-11 04:29 PM


Silent, so silent
only the garden can hear
Butterflies retreat

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

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Dennis L. White
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1 posted 2001-11-11 06:19 PM


butterflies retreat
leave behind this harsh climate
smiling in silence

I hope the beautiful butterflies have left for friendlier climes before now, otherwise they may be freezing their swallow tails off. Good one Ellie, P.U.Y.M.S., Dennis

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2 posted 2001-11-11 07:05 PM


Lovely.  Joyce
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3 posted 2001-11-12 12:14 PM


I love this ellie!  What a wonderful concept.

Betty Lou Hebert

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4 posted 2001-11-12 09:47 PM


Lovely, Ellie!
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