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PoetryIsLife
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...in my boxers...

0 posted 2001-10-28 07:40 PM


I can’t hide my love anymore -
it’s taken me whole!

Wait! there’s more!
Let’s lose control!

Your beuty, your grace!
Oh what a pace
my heart keeps
when you’re a peep.

Say yes!
Let’s pass the test
this love throws at us.
Hop on the bus
that is this passion
this passion that has me
that has me whole!

Say yes!
Let go!

                                10/10/01

"Old Men Love While Young Men Die" Kipling

© Copyright 2001 Daniel Redding - All Rights Reserved
Lone Wolf
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1 posted 2001-10-28 07:45 PM


Ah, to be in love.  There is nothing like it.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

PoetryIsLife
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2 posted 2001-10-28 11:11 PM


=) Tis true.

Titus

PS: Nice qoute...

"Old Men Love While Young Men Die" Kipling

barbaraj
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3 posted 2003-02-02 12:56 PM


i loved this poem.

A Person Who Asks A Question Is A Fool For Five Minutes, A Person Who Doesn't Is A Fool Forever ...


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4 posted 2003-02-02 02:57 PM


Man, my work has changed.... lol. It's been a long time since I wrote this one.

~Titus


Es ist gut, daß das Leben die Toten studieren sollte.

[This message has been edited by PoetryIsLife (02-02-2003 02:58 PM).]

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