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janmew
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0 posted 2001-10-27 09:42 PM



With his young wife and his wee boys, three
he took the long journey across the wide sea.
Two years Will spent working hard for a boss
whilst traveling each Sunday to preach 'fore the cross.

Tales of a place where land was cheap;
the fruits of his toils his own to reap;
where a person could make their own success,
soon lured him north to the wilderness.

No road to travel to the home he’d construct
O’re streams and through forests on foot he trucked
He struggled and toiled to clear his new land
pulled every tree stump with his very own hand.

He carried supplies for miles on his back
easily shouldering a forty pound sack,
He worked building roads for more settlers to come
and saved every penny to build his new home.

With first just one cow, and a sickly old horse
life in the wilds was a struggle of course
then just when things looked like they’d turn around
fire in the chimney razed their house to the ground.

All but the clothes on their backs they did lose
through tears and soot he was forced to choose,
turning his back and walking away
was not the choice he made on that day.

Will set his sights forward and built his new life
Working season after season to overcome strife
Building a farm from the earth with his hands
a home for his family in this untamed land.

Then one sweltering hot day in mid July
the voices of many would be heard to cry
The Great Fire of ‘16 raged like wild thunder
spreading terror in it’s wake, leaving survivors in wonder.

Many a poor settler lost their lives on that day
when the bush went up in flames like tinder-dry hay
blazing forward unstoppable in leaps and in bounds
taking everything with it, leaving only black ground

He struggled relentless with ladder and pail
catching each spark; determined not to fail;
weary and worn when the inferno was past
but alive and not homeless, and resting at last.

Standing amid the smoldering embers
nothing for miles but fire scorched timbers
a home standing proudly where it shouldn’t be so;
a landmark proclaiming what one man can do.

Poetry is an expression of feelings.  I do not write poems, but rather, the poems use me to write themselves.

© Copyright 2001 Jan - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2001-10-27 10:21 PM


JanMew~
Very nicely done.
I enjoyed the cadence which made it a pleasure to read~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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2 posted 2001-10-27 11:03 PM


I love your story poem.  Joyce
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3 posted 2001-10-28 11:13 PM


This is a great story and well written.  Perhaps it speaks to me especially as my parents homesteaded in Northern Alberta in the 1920's.  I have heard many tales of the hardships they went through. I even remember a few my self from the late 30's!

Betty Lou Hebert

janmew
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4 posted 2003-01-03 10:16 PM


I had lost this poem in the threads. SO sorry not to have replied earlier. I'm so glad everyone enjoyed reading it. I have made one slight modification to it since the original.

Jan

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