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Xeonox
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0 posted 2001-05-19 03:51 AM


On days such as this-
I am reminded of my writing,
Do I feel passionate-
About what I do,
Or should I stop-
My random thoughts?
The true meaning of my words-
Lies within me,
No poetry could ever-
Capture my feelings,

For I write like the others,
Through my heart-
And not my soul.

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

© Copyright 2001 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2001-05-20 01:22 AM


I think your soul is shining through.  Joyce
brian madden
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2 posted 2001-05-20 02:41 PM


I think what is truely close to us, what we feel the most passionately for can not be fully expressed in words, we can relate parts of but not the full lot so don't despair continue to speak from both your heart and your soul.    

"across the unfair divide
where black will never meet white
so read my token lips
like they never exist"

nicky wire


Xeonox
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3 posted 2001-05-20 07:32 PM


thanks for the responses. I appericate them. Thank you joyce.

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

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