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ellie LeJeune
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0 posted 2001-10-15 01:24 AM


Life is illusion
shifting sands upon the shore
Love is ever real

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

© Copyright 2001 ellie LeJeune - All Rights Reserved
BloomingRose
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1 posted 2001-10-15 07:37 AM


Oh so true! I like this very much.

Deb  

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2 posted 2001-10-15 08:35 AM


Beautiful Ellie  

Maree  

Trillium
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3 posted 2001-10-15 02:26 PM


Beautiful, as usual! You do have a flair!

Betty Lou Hebert

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4 posted 2001-10-15 09:50 PM


Ellie~

How true!  You express this beautifully    You KNOW I love these kind of sernyus  

Take care,
Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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5 posted 2001-10-16 06:00 PM


I envy your talent to say so much with so few words.  Joyce
Denise
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6 posted 2001-10-16 09:56 PM


Another gem, Ellie!
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7 posted 2001-10-21 08:19 PM


Awww it does and I like this

I breathe the dust, the dust is me.


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