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Joyce Johnson
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0 posted 2005-10-24 03:27 PM


One Love In A Lifetime

By luck you didn't see me
As your bold eyes swept the room.
I stayed within the shadows
As you poised to pluck a bloom.
I saw you take her hand and
Whirl her gaily to the floor
And skittered to the exit
Before I could see more.

Hours later when I hear you
Quietly insert the key,
I wonder just what story
You've concocted to tell me.
I do not want to hear it,
I pretend to be asleep
And what I have to say to you
Can until morning keep.

One love in a lifetime is
How it was meant to be;
One love in a long lifetime
Enough for you and me.
One love in a lifetime
Would be forever true.
One love in a lifetime proved
For you to be too few.

By: Joyce 10/24/05

[This message has been edited by Joyce Johnson (10-24-2005 07:00 PM).]

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1 posted 2005-10-24 06:05 PM


Dear Joyce:  A well written and sad poem. Unfortunately it happens this way so often!

love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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2 posted 2005-10-25 10:12 AM


Joyce~
You pen the heart's emotions so very effectively~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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3 posted 2005-10-25 08:47 PM


gheez, this one aches word-by-word
and even though I don't believe ther is only one for me in this lifetime? for those who do believe, this has got to be a heart ripper

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4 posted 2005-11-20 11:25 AM


Such a powerful rhyme. I found my one love in a lifetime, but not everybody is so lucky.  
Joyce Johnson
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5 posted 2005-11-20 12:45 PM


Thanks friends.  Love, Joyce
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6 posted 2005-11-20 12:48 PM


Dear Joyce - I have felt this awful ache and deception  more than once in my life. You write of it very well.
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
~Carl Sandburg

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7 posted 2005-11-20 05:50 PM


Dear Chris,  I am so sorry.  I hope these are well behind you.  Love, Joyce
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8 posted 2005-11-22 07:26 AM


Dear Joyce

I know about this first hand too!  So sad to read this poem of yours but it was well versed!

Love Verbena xo


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9 posted 2005-11-30 04:00 PM


written with the pain of someone who knows, for that i am sorry, but am not sorry that you seem to understand me so well these days.
again all i can say is thank you for your imput.
Annie

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10 posted 2005-12-26 01:22 PM


Well written versees here, Joyce.

The theme is all to real.

coyote 8)

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11 posted 2005-12-26 08:41 PM


Thanks for reading my ramblings.  Love, Joyce
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12 posted 2005-12-27 11:17 PM


Dear Joyce,

I've been there before.. rambling or not, I like the poignancy in your writing

Love
MiCheLLe

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13 posted 2005-12-28 10:46 PM


A sad read. One love in a lifetime if only
could be for two! I enjoyed this read but I wanted to send you hugs!
pictureme2

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