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aussie teen
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0 posted 2005-02-08 08:17 AM



one silent tear
origins unknown
its meaning beyond
my tired comprehension

one silent tear
rolling steadily
down my cheek
making me wonder
what is going on
in my head
not for the first time

one silent tear
origin unknown
meaning beyond me
what comes next???

this came to me a few nights ago... i really dont know what triggered this but any comments you have are more than welcome...
cheers Ruth

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

© Copyright 2005 Ruth - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-02-08 11:32 AM


I can't know where your tear originated  but the result was a pleasing poem.  Joyce
aussie teen
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2 posted 2005-02-09 04:14 AM


thankyou joyce for replying.

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

Annie78
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3 posted 2005-02-10 12:07 PM


sweetie silent tears sometimes come from a dream, nightmare, even a smile. this brought me a smile. there are many reasons for silent tears...i have many along with the smiles gotten here.
Annie

there is but a short time to exist, love,laugh,live and never stop believing in miracles

aussie teen
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4 posted 2005-02-11 08:16 AM


thankyou for your kind words annie... my tear though came when i was wide awake and doing some dress designs.....
Ruth

live life as if your going to die tomorow....... but love as if your going to live forever......

tecoyah
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5 posted 2005-02-12 10:12 AM


Tears are lifes whitewash, Silent tears may very well be the reason we paint at all.

I enjoyed this very much.

aussie teen
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6 posted 2005-02-13 08:06 AM


thankyou tecoya.
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7 posted 2005-02-14 01:06 PM


nice write
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