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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2001-05-18 09:39 AM



#1

what is love, if it isn't sharing
more than words,
it's time spent too.
what IS love, if it isn't caring
wanting most,
to be with you.

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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Mother_Earth
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1 posted 2001-05-18 09:53 AM


nakdthoughts, you hit -the- nail- right- on- the -head!  Like your thoughts.  ME
nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2001-05-18 02:45 PM


thank you ME...some days are like that...

sighing
M

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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3 posted 2001-05-18 06:44 PM


Not many words here but a lot of expression.
Good job.

Betty Lou Hebert

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4 posted 2001-05-19 03:15 AM


Wynter~

sharing ... caring wrapped around love ...
perfect !
~*Marge*~

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kcsgrandma
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5 posted 2001-05-19 11:08 AM


How many deep thoughts are wrapped in small poetic packages!  This makes me look forward to thought #2.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

Denise
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6 posted 2001-05-19 01:06 PM


Just lovely, Maureen! Very nice!
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7 posted 2001-05-20 01:27 AM


Very direct and true.  Joyce
nakdthoughts
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8 posted 2001-05-24 05:18 PM


I am  sorry ...I didn't  get to thank you all for your nice comments..*s

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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