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Trillium
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0 posted 2004-03-22 04:13 PM





The Things I See in You

Some people see the beauty
In another persons face.
Appreciate intelligence
And admire poise and grace.
They see that you are charming
And your humor wins them too,
But no one knows the layers
Of the things I see in you!

They can't see the history
That we two alone have shared.
Or all the tender actions
Just to show me that you cared.
The times we faced together
Any problems in our view.
Each emphasized the value
Of the things I see in you!

Betty Lou Hebert

© Copyright 2004 Betty Lou Hebert - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-03-22 04:56 PM


Such a loving poem, Betty.  Hang tight.  Love, Joyce
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2 posted 2004-03-22 06:08 PM


You have to be beatiful inside to be able to write beautiful things like this.
Hope all is well.
Love, Barb

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3 posted 2004-03-22 06:59 PM


Dear Joyce:  I wrote this for my husband and all is well!  Thanks.

Betty Lou Hebert

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4 posted 2004-03-22 07:00 PM


Dear Barb: I write poetry for my husband once in awhile and this is one of them.
Thanks for your sweet comments.

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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5 posted 2004-04-04 09:52 AM


Dear Betty Lou

This is very touching and it shows the love that you have for your husband.

Love Isobel


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6 posted 2004-04-04 02:21 PM


BettyLou~
Well now ... isn't this just the sweetest !!!
YES IT IS !!

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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7 posted 2004-04-04 08:17 PM


Dear Isobel:  Thanks.  I always write a poem for Will on our anniversary.

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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8 posted 2004-04-04 08:18 PM


Dear Marge:  Thanks!  Glad you liked it!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

brezee
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9 posted 2004-04-06 09:24 PM


Awwwww...that's sweet. i can relate to this, although i am not married, many of my friends are the same... great write


~*brezee*~

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10 posted 2004-04-06 10:19 PM


brezee:  Thanks for reading and I appreciate your comments.

Betty Lou Hebert

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11 posted 2004-04-07 04:19 AM


delightful!
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12 posted 2004-04-07 07:27 PM


passing shadows: thanks for reading.

Betty Lou Hebert

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