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Dennis L. White
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0 posted 2001-08-18 01:57 PM



Tranquility gone

Sacrificed to god of Self

Reaping bitter fruit



© Copyright 2001 Dennis L. White - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-08-18 07:22 PM


This is sad, but beautifully done!

Betty Lou Hebert

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2 posted 2001-08-18 08:22 PM


Ah the sin of selfishness.  A bitter harvest.
Joyce

Denise
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3 posted 2001-08-19 05:14 PM


So true, so true. Well done, Dennis!
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4 posted 2001-08-22 01:20 PM


Awesome job here. wow!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

ellie LeJeune
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5 posted 2001-08-22 05:37 PM


Dennis; This is sad and so different for you. I do know the feeling. Well said! Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

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6 posted 2001-08-25 09:19 PM



Very well expressed, Dennis!

Melissa~

"Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding
wound...or a smiling mouth"

~Kahlil Gibran~

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