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Krawdad
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0 posted 2001-08-13 01:23 AM


A Power to Succumb to


This is a power to succumb to
to stand free under
to rake in with binocular ears
to rinse one’s arrogance of power
to salve your titillation aggression

This is the show . . . pay attention

submit
to soothing grey-blue light

The electric dream

Thunderstorm!
        
      

"As soon as the generals and the politicos can predict the motions of your mind, lose it."     Wendell Berry


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1 posted 2001-08-13 01:32 AM


Krawdad:  Impressive!  The power in a thunder storm is always awesome!

Betty Lou Hebert

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Member Rara Avis
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2 posted 2001-08-13 08:43 PM


Very nice.  And indeed a thunderstorm is awesome.  Joyce
dgvarner
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3 posted 2001-08-20 12:33 PM


powerful are thunderstorms!  enjoyed this, KRAW  

hugs, g

~dgvarner/fallen rain~

"i believe we are here for a reason.  
as each day unfolds,
we see less of the shadow
and more of the sun"  -unknown

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4 posted 2001-08-21 09:03 AM


Very nicely done - The power of Nature can be quite humbling for sure - I like this piece...
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