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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA 
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Take-off feeling exhileration into soft white winged clouds. Enfolded safety of hearts Faith. Death has lost her fears. This I see so clearly through eyes of Spirits Truth unveiled. Revealing the depth of Life lived. Accept all the joys, the pain as one glorious Gift.. that keeps giving eternally. A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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wintertao Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 366Okaloosa Island, FL |
I like this but think it needs work...some more descriptive phrases...what did you see out the window, what did that make you think....etc....just my 1 cent. |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Lovely. I do so enjoy your poetry. Hope you come back more often. Love, Joyce |
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Shereen Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 57Michigan, USA |
Ellie, I can relate to this awakening of the spirit in so many ways. Very nice. Shereen. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ellie~ You pen such beauty~ This is no exception~ WONDERFUL~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very uplifting  |
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junemac Senior Member
since 2003-04-24
Posts 1005uk |
love this one it is very uplifting and calming too. hugs june x |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
ellie: Lovely and uplifiting. Betty Lou Hebert |
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pegasus111 Member Elite
since 2000-07-27
Posts 2219ocala, fl, usa |
sweet Elli. I have missed you...  the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow |
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