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jaicie114
Senior Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 750
On the edge of forever

0 posted 2003-12-23 10:02 PM

My heart races
when you are near --

But…
It is the space
between the beats
that knows
the Truth.

Yes…
It is the space
that recognizes
your splendor…

Then…
Courses through
my veins,
on a wild race
to my heart.

There…
To bask
in your beauty

There…
To fill me
with the essence
of your love.

There…
To fall
into the depths
of infinity…

alongside
the glory
that is
You.

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

1 posted 2003-12-23 11:08 PM

Very pretty!

Terri~

Well I will go down with this ship
And I won't put my hands up and surrender...Dido

jaicie114
Senior Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 750
On the edge of forever

2 posted 2003-12-23 11:38 PM

Terri...

Thank you for your reply. I truly appreciate it.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

He who talks to the dead
Junior Member

since 2003-07-08

Posts 30
Newport, United Kingdom

3 posted 2003-12-25 12:12 PM

It's a very good poem, well thought out, and certainly something anyone with a heart can relate to. Well Done.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2003-12-25 06:52 PM

Dear jaicie, you scatter your gems in a wide circle and it is a pleasure to discover the treasures of your soul.

Just awesome.
Love, Margherita

jaicie114
Senior Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 750
On the edge of forever

5 posted 2003-12-27 11:07 AM

He who talks and Margherita...

Thank you so much for your comments...I'm very glad you enjoyed this one!

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-01-03 02:28 PM

beautiful

Ravenwolfvoyager
Member

since 2003-12-25

Posts 326

7 posted 2004-01-05 06:36 PM

You capture a difficult thing to do. You write each poem as if you just fell in love and it is a rare thing to behold. The words you use are always spellcasting and compliment the meaning you are trying to get across. Thank you again for the share.

jaicie114
Senior Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 750
On the edge of forever

8 posted 2004-01-05 10:59 PM

Dixie...so are you!

RWV...what a wondrous thing to say...wow...I'm humbled by your words.

Thank you, both.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

Shereen
Member

since 2004-01-05

Posts 57
Michigan, USA

9 posted 2004-01-05 11:23 PM

The space between the beats DOES know the truth! Very sweet and passionate -if not a bit of a secretive emotion- is love. She wears many faces and you seem to have captured a few of them here. Thank you for this... I needed it today.
Shereen.

jaicie114
Senior Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 750
On the edge of forever

10 posted 2004-01-05 11:25 PM

Oh, Shereen...I'm so glad that you found this when you needed it. Thank you for your lovely comments, as well.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

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