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junemac
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since 2003-04-24
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uk

0 posted 2003-12-04 05:43 PM


Hear Me

You can try to convince me if you like
I will not listen, I will not believe
You see I have been here once before
Heard every plausable excuse you concieve

Hiding your shame, flustered and wary
A painful story in effort of deceit
Harnessing anger, passing the blame
Burying feelingsbeneath conceit

Before you try to bend my will
Scream and shout and castigate
Accept our differences like I do
Reconcile and accept our fate

Learn from this that you are free
Undestand that we were never there
That you didnt love me any more
Go forward now and learn to care

© Copyright 2003 june macfarlane - All Rights Reserved
pictureme
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since 2003-11-28
Posts 248
Ohio, USA
1 posted 2003-12-04 09:33 PM


Moving on! Reminded me of that song! Learn from our experience and move on to a better
thing! You said it well
pictureme :-)

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~
2 posted 2003-12-05 09:01 AM


And it goes both ways doesn't it!
Love,
Terri~


Well I will go down with this ship
And I won't put my hands up and surrender...Dido

[This message has been edited by SharaRose (12-05-2003 09:01 AM).]

Sparticus
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since 2003-11-15
Posts 245

3 posted 2003-12-05 10:26 AM


Ouch!

You do a great "get on with your life" poem here.  Don't let the clock turn another hour...

Good one.

Sparticus

Even with insects-
some can sing
some can't

-Issa
http://www.geocities.com/amanaman3/Jessepoems.html

cusick
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since 2003-07-27
Posts 668

4 posted 2003-12-05 01:37 PM


I'mglad you are not hanging around to be humiliated. Very well written. Maggie
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5 posted 2003-12-06 06:50 PM




(smiles) Oh June, this is such a wonderfully uplifting and proverbial poem, sweet friend, may we all stand up and embrace the sun and seek new blessings each day, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet June, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

NewEnglandlazurlu
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since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise
6 posted 2003-12-06 07:56 PM


Geez, that's really telling him June. You go girl!

Hugs, Marti

'You cannot shake hands with a clenched fist.'  
PEACE!!!
Indira Gandhi

jaicie114
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since 2003-09-27
Posts 750
On the edge of forever
7 posted 2003-12-06 11:20 PM


Wow, June...

Between you and Dixie...I think I'm learning a thing or two!!! LOL Thanks for the great write!  (Now, if I can just remember the lesson!)

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

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