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cusick
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0 posted 2003-12-04 04:24 PM




I saw the sadness in her eyes
and knew that it is over.
No more would I linger
in sweet ecstasy,
in once warm arms
grown Cold like
Winter's snowy peaks.

She knew .

Desire lay like
ashes between us.
One brief dalliance
from our sacred bastion
denied me all my
tomorrows dreams.

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pictureme
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1 posted 2003-12-04 09:35 PM


What a terribly sad thing to loose :-(
Your emotion shows in your choosen words!
pictureme

SharaRose
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Somewhere out there~
2 posted 2003-12-05 09:12 AM


Daliance...doesn't daliance assume alot. Hmm? I once knew someone that played me, and now calls it daliance. Isn't that special. Isn't it funny they don't call it daliance when they are getting what they want. Sounds like we met the same guy. Thanks Maggie for sharing.
Love,
Terri~


Well I will go down with this ship
And I won't put my hands up and surrender...Dido

[This message has been edited by SharaRose (12-05-2003 09:18 AM).]

Sparticus
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3 posted 2003-12-05 10:24 AM


There is a lot of feeling in this wonderful observation.

Sparticus

Even with insects-
some can sing
some can't

-Issa
http://www.geocities.com/amanaman3/Jessepoems.html

BloomingRose
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4 posted 2003-12-05 11:23 AM


Sad, but sometimes that's the way things happen. We have to move on to find hapiness.

Deb

cusick
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5 posted 2003-12-05 01:29 PM


Thank you for replyong picture me. Maggie
cusick
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6 posted 2003-12-05 01:29 PM


Nice of you to reply terri. Maggie
cusick
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7 posted 2003-12-05 01:30 PM


Thank you Sparticus. Maggie
cusick
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8 posted 2003-12-05 01:31 PM


Much arpeciated Deb. maggie
titch k
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9 posted 2003-12-06 01:34 AM


i am elated i finally found this place
the verse are beautiful
i enjoyed reading
love Titch

passing shadows
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10 posted 2003-12-06 03:51 AM


I can feel it
cusick
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11 posted 2003-12-06 05:27 AM


Thank you Titch, I have a feeling we have met on another forum. Maggie
cusick
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12 posted 2003-12-06 05:28 AM


Thjank you so much Shadow. Maggie
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13 posted 2003-12-06 06:32 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Maggie, I send many angel comfort hugs your way and to all who feel this kind of abrupt loss, sweet friend, you are far too special to ever be denied and I wish for true magic to fill your heart forever! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maggie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

jaicie114
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14 posted 2003-12-06 11:41 PM


denied me all my
tomorrows dreams.

Maggie...I like the whole poem...very, very nice...but this verse...WOW...I love it!

Thank you so much for sharing with us.

Love and Light...jc

This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light.

cusick
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15 posted 2003-12-07 10:31 AM


Thank you so much Noah, Love Maggie
cusick
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16 posted 2003-12-07 10:32 AM


jaicy thank you so much, glad that you liked it. Maggie
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