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Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2001-05-17 12:31 PM

The want isn’t ended,
When the need is fed,

It allies with temptation,
Achieving its ways,

Receiving what is not-
Your own,

Creating a want evermore

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

obscurity of cloud
Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 294
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1 posted 2001-05-17 11:27 AM

Your words are set up to compliment your subject perfectly. Nice work.

"so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

2 posted 2001-05-17 02:19 PM

Greed multiplied by greed. Joyce

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

3 posted 2001-05-17 07:35 PM

thank you my friends.

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

4 posted 2001-05-17 08:20 PM

The want isn’t ended,
When the need is fed,

It allies with temptation,
Achieving its ways,

Receiving what is not-
Your own,

Creating a want evermore

This is great, gives the reader something to think about

I enjoyed.

Maree

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

5 posted 2001-05-18 06:28 PM

thanks dark angel. A brain teaser, maybe?

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

brian madden
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

6 posted 2001-05-30 05:23 PM

true of so many things.... as constant consumers it is the danger all humans face.
enjoed the read

"you are what you own in this land, you can be king and it all depends on the view and what you can see" Whipping boy

RebeccaJoy
Junior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 35

7 posted 2001-05-30 08:08 PM

Very true, precise, and well written. Enjoyed this writing.

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

8 posted 2001-05-31 12:40 PM

Rebecca and Brian, I thank you for responding.

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

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