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symphony_of_thoughts
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0 posted 2003-09-03 06:01 PM



Unveiling the cloth from one's eyes
Can prove to be miraculously gold
Within determined truth this may lie
Unveling this cloth from dirtied eyes
Can prove a nightmarish calamity
Within undetermined, unheard, goals this may lie
But if this person can soon forget and accept
This nightmare can transform to something gold
A memento worth keeping and improving

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1 posted 2003-09-07 07:07 PM


Symphony~
Please forgive us for letting this sit down here for four days without a reply~

It is truly a lovely and tender write~
Bumping it for others to enjoy~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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symphony_of_thoughts
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2 posted 2003-09-07 07:15 PM


I don't mind if some of my poems don't get replies for awhile or if they don't get replies at all.  I just don't like to take up someone's space where their poetry could be by reposting old poems of mine, so I just let the ones that i have that didn't get many or any replies go.  Thank you for your comment.
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