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Solstice Son Member
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469 |
redwing blackbird blue sky red sun white skin crimson blood red berries black thorns red lips suckled tips fingers throbbing from the pain muffled groan dark delight pain inflicted deep skin throbbing gone laughter here little pixies always near watching waiting staring too dragon fly red hawk good berries stealth stalk silver moon rising high stars out...... so am I. " and I dream of her always, |
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Trillium 
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Solstice Son: This made me smile as I have been picking thorny raspberries for several days now and I have all the scratches to prove it! Betty Lou Hebert |
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gringakiwi Member
since 2003-08-05
Posts 189 |
This is a great poem! I was giggling! I can just imagine all your scratches...(those berries are worth it in the end!) Great structure too. |
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cusick Senior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 668 |
I expect you ate half of what you picked. Lovely subject. Maggie |
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SPIRIT Senior Member
since 2002-12-29
Posts 1745California Desert |
Very well penned - brought a big old smile on my face - thank you. |
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