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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2003-08-08 05:36 PM


I'm Still Overjoyed

I never think I would touch your heart,
Yet tonight you seem to be different.
You seem to be more relax,
More of a chatter today.

Usually I'm to be heard,
Yet tonight you speak endlessly.
You speak of things I never thought
That they are your intuition.

You speak of gentleness;
I begin to get to know you.
You once shown an aloof face,
Now I learn your baby smile.

Once I thought, you never care;
Now I know, how much my words hurt you.
Now I know your heart yet
Yet I feel overwhelmed.

You speak of gentleness,
Yet I'm still grasping your words.
I can't believe
At last my dream comes true.

You speak of gentleness,
Yet I'm still overjoyed.
I can't believe
That you're in love, with me.

Author Note: This is an imaginative piece.

(c)Aug 8, 2003
Eliza Simmons


Eliza Simmons
~Every girl has a dream within.
~Yesterday insult, today gain.

[This message has been edited by aries_luv_ppl (08-08-2003 05:39 PM).]

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Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2003-08-08 07:59 PM


But some day it will be true and you will be able to recognize it when it comes.  Love, Joyce
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2 posted 2003-08-08 11:07 PM


Eliza:  Lovely piece of what might be right on your doorstep!

Betty Lou Hebert

pegasus111
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3 posted 2003-08-09 06:55 AM


I liked this. keep the faith...

the woods are lovely, dark, and deep, but I have promises to keep, and many miles to go before I sleep...Frost



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