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coyote
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0 posted 2003-07-26 10:54 PM


You stepped today
across that divide
one toddling teeter
to a tiptoed stride

your smile was elated
amazed by yourself
eyes were blue skies
and you laughed
like an elf

how quickly you’ve grown
my littlest one

already a’walkin’
my Ian
my son


"The rose, like the cactus flower, protects herself with thorns. We however, impale ourselves on their beauty." WFS

[This message has been edited by coyote (07-26-2003 10:55 PM).]

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DawnG
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1 posted 2003-07-27 12:04 PM


A very sweet poem for your son. Enjoy every moment you can with him because he will be a grown man before you can blink.

                                      Dawn

2dalimit
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2 posted 2003-07-27 07:51 AM


There once was a wily coyote
He's known as uncle Billy
He gives us a smile
Every once in a while
With tales about his baby


Great news. Keep us updated on his growth.

Thanks,
Melton

SharaRose
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3 posted 2003-07-27 08:53 AM


It's amazing to see the little ones grow...just amazing every step of the way!!!!!! What a sweet write!!! One can see you are so proud!!!

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

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4 posted 2003-07-27 05:50 PM


Thanks for sharing this with us.  It's always so exciting and endearing to watch your child take it's first steps.

Betty Lou Hebert

Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2003-07-27 08:34 PM


Coyote~

The whole thing is precious ...
but I ADORE this -

<>'one toddling teeter
to a tiptoed stride'

ADORABLE !!
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

coyote
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6 posted 2003-07-27 10:39 PM


Thanks M'friends.

He kinda tiptoes, like a ballet dancer.

Every moment is amazing.

luv,
coyote

Joyce Johnson
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7 posted 2003-07-29 07:06 PM


Amazing little one and delightful poetry.  Joyce
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