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TheGoalie
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since 2003-06-15
Posts 47
Poughkeepsie, Ny/Long Island, Ny

0 posted 2003-07-23 06:14 AM


                  -Each New Day-


Caffeine and nicotine and little pink pills
Are all that get me through these days.  
I wake up with my head resting upon
These tear stained pillows and my body
Wrapped up in cold, lonely sheets.
I step from my bed, a hollow, vacant
Stare in my deep brown eyes as I
Silently begin another faithless day.

After six beers, lying to myself becomes
Easier.  Maybe if I tell my heart it does not ache
And that the hole she left inside of me
Will heal with time, I may come to believe.
Each new beer and cigarette leaves
A bitter taste in my mouth, like a lie
from a forked tongued devil that decieves
and tears apart my tender soul for fun.

Within my melancholy stupor, I come
To the realization that life is not a race
I have to win.  And when I come to depend
Upon someone else for my own happiness, They
Have all the power in the world to break me.
So I will slow down, and enjoy the small
Moments of love and joy in each new day.
And count the scars on my heart among my blessings.

"Ain't Got no quarrels with God, ain't got no time to grow old.  Lord knows I'm weak, won't somebody get me off of this reef"  

© Copyright 2003 Joe - All Rights Reserved
SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~
1 posted 2003-07-23 12:43 PM


I know what I'm about to say is much easier said than done, and I have to echo it to myself so it's not advice I wouldn't need to follow myself, but I learned something and have always tried to teach it to my sons. Don't put all your eggs in one basket. If all hinges on one thing you will be disappointed is what I would tell them. I tell that to myself, too. It's hard not to love. We are created to do that, but we are humans, and humans make mistakes...we will disappoint so that's why we have to learn to love God as our first priority, because HE won't disappoint. I think in turn THEN He will give us that ONE person that will not hurt us and disappoint, because HE only gives what's GOOD for us. He says "seek first the kingdom of Heaven and all these things will be added unto you".. so that's where I got this thought, or idea from. Kind of made sense to me, but who knows. Just a thought is all. Loved this write. Very nice reading. Sorry if this came across preachy it's just that I see things on such a PRACTICAL plane of thinking. Well I think I do..hehehe I don't know. Thanks for sharing this anyways!

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228
Mississippi coast
2 posted 2003-07-23 02:17 PM


Confession is good for the soul, they say.

So I will slow down, and enjoy the small
Moments of love and joy in each new day.
And count the scars on my heart among my blessings.


I like these lines. You'll be all right.

Melton

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Member Patricius
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098
Idaho, USA
3 posted 2003-07-23 03:28 PM


The Goalie:  Your poem indicates that you are starting to recover from your bad experience. Something, we each have to do by ourselves, it seems.  Hope there are better days ahead for you!

Betty Lou Hebert

missmisery61
Member
since 2003-07-08
Posts 56

4 posted 2003-07-23 04:25 PM


Within my melancholy stupor, I come
To the realization that life is not a race
I have to win.  And when I come to depend
Upon someone else for my own happiness, They
Have all the power in the world to break me.

I've encountered more than a few in the world who like nothing more than to control or "break" people.  This phrase you wrote above, it came from the gut, and it proves that you are a fighter.  I have faith in you.

Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

5 posted 2003-07-23 04:28 PM


Fantastic piece of writing. Very well expressed!
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